One of the checklist items I need to fix is my MLA formatting. I am going to fix my header so that it is in the correct format, and I need to add sources in MLA format as well. Another item I need to fix is the hit-and-run quotes. I want to better incorporate the quotes into my paragraphs so that the information flows smoother. I also want to fix some of how I analyze my piece to make sure it is fresh, nuanced, and honest. I could work on my analysis by better putting the ‘I say’ into my piece instead of just repeating what the author is saying. I can also fix my conclusion, it needs to tie together all of the points I made in my paper and restate my thesis in a different way. To do this I will read over my paper again and make sure I have all of the main points in my conclusion. The last thing I want to fix is add more support into my paper. I want to add more quotes and evidence from each of the readings that we did.
Very good action plan. I am glad to see you note that you need more evidence in the quote dept. And I think tying everything together in a more cohesive argument at the end is also a good goal. Nice work!