Life’s challenges and hardships are part of being human and are almost unavoidable throughout a lifetime. From daily struggles to world hunger, we face a lot of suffering as a common race. However, many people feel as though they have a responsibility to help relieve some of that suffering. An extreme example could be a group called Effective Altruism, they strive to end suffering by giving money to the needy. On the other hand, there is Dre Urhahn and Jeroen Koolhaas, painters who believe in relief through art and have brought joy to the favelas of Rio by painting murals in the communities. If one feels the need to volunteer and give back to those who need it, there is no right or wrong way to help someone. Although giving money is often seen as the most effective way to give back, there are many other influential acts that others can help by doing.
Alternative thesis:
Good deeds come in all shapes and sizes and should come from the kindness of one’s own heart.
“Although giving money is often seen as the most effective way to give back, there are many other influential acts that others can help by doing.”
I think you could marry your second thesis choice with the top choice…
Your introduction flows well, but I would insert into your introduction about the Southan article.
“From daily struggles to world hunger, we face a lot of suffering as a common race.” This is a good hook and really makes me want to read more!